River Poem by S.D. TIWARI

River

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River

Flow is my life
frozen I die
stop only if dry

I have two banks
but no dollar or francs
More important than dollar
for you and me is water.

Monday, October 10, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: river
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jeremiah Walton 10 October 2011

'for you and me' feels awkward when I read it out loud. I enjoyed the opening 3 lines simplicity quite a bit. They mean a lot and open up the poem nicely

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