Saturday, July 9, 2011

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Rating: 5.0

I fall as I scream, and wait for you to catch me
But you aren't paying attention so you don't see
I'm falling deep below, I'm falling for you
I'm falling in love, and there's nothing I can do
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Stefanie Fontker 17 August 2011

Sounds tough, love is hard. Great poem, though. Beautiful writing.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 09 July 2011

Marvellous poem written with great skill. Rich in imagery and emotions. I liked and rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Monalisa' on page 1.

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