Rock Bottom Poem by Rokket Grrl

Rock Bottom

Rating: 5.0


I fall as I scream, and wait for you to catch me
But you aren't paying attention so you don't see
I'm falling deep below, I'm falling for you
I'm falling in love, and there's nothing I can do
Every second I fall the light at the top becomes more distant
And I keep falling deeper with each second, each instant
Because every time I look at you I fall a little bit more in love
And I dream of the life I had in the wonderful world above
I know I'm not the only one falling hoping someone has caught them
And I know I'm the only one now hitting rock bottom

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stefanie Fontker 17 August 2011

Sounds tough, love is hard. Great poem, though. Beautiful writing.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 09 July 2011

Marvellous poem written with great skill. Rich in imagery and emotions. I liked and rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Monalisa' on page 1.

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