Romance Poem by TIMOTHY KNIGHT HILL

Romance

Rating: 3.7


I said I love you.
Your hair is like spun silk.
Your eyes are like pools of water I want to dive into.
Your breast are like snow covered twin peaks in the Rockies.
Your skin is soft and milky white.
Your voice is like a mockingbird singing in a magnolia tree.
I love you so much
Please give me another chance.
She looked at me and said No finance No romance.

Saturday, July 18, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Baker 23 August 2017

can't read anymore... johannax

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Roseann Shawiak 19 July 2015

Great poem Timothy, love, romance and the final put down, No finance, No romance. Love it, seems to be the precedent these days doesn't it? Your imagery is superb with a light rhythm. Keep writing! RoseAnn

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