Wednesday, December 7, 2005

Rosa Comments

Rating: 4.5

Only one man sat behind
Ms. Rosa Parks, and he looked glum,
an image in the viewer’s mind
of heartbeats on a bigot’s drum
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gershon hepner
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Hugh Cobb 07 December 2005

Nice poem, well-crafted and concise. A solid 9. Of course the photo was a re-creation, Ms Parks's original act of courage was not done as a photo-op & was only recorded in the criminal record. This was an attempt, not to pass it off as the original act but was always or should have been noted as a re-creation so there could be some way of visually feeding Ms. Parks's heroism to the public, else the civil rights movement might have been much delayed in taking off.

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***** ********* 07 December 2005

I liked the poem gershon! 9 from Tai

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