Sunday, June 22, 2008

Roses Ii Comments

Rating: 3.5

Shapely and curvaceous lips,
Protruding at intervals to each other,
Circling, entranced, around it's nectar eclipsed,
They protect from an unwanted interloper.
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Ciaran Quirke
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Greenwolfe 1962 07 September 2008

I suppose this piece is supposed to increase the complexity of the first two verses in the firtst piece. It does succeed in that, bur not much else. It leaves a reader still wondering why he took the time. GW62

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Viola Grey 23 June 2008

absolutely fantastic...you have a beautiful way of looking at things...great work

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