Thursday, June 16, 2016

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I often dream I'm falling asleep
Stepping stones,
Taking roads far too steep
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Jack Wakefield
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Jazib Kamalvi 08 March 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Jack W. You may like to read my poem, Love And. Thank you.

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Kelly Kurt 16 June 2016

Nicely written piece, Jack. Thanks

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Andrea Blooms Isabel 16 June 2016

Deep and sad.. Keep going.

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Geoffrey Fafard 16 June 2016

First poem on PH. Jack…Intense, sad, deep and good.Well written it awakens those senses it is supposed to.Keep writing.It will be good to read more….cheers geoffrey.

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