Divers errors glaring
Defects myriad staring
To natural wanting
Not render consent
Forsake the corporal
Boggling, lament gutless, end
From crass ignorance dissent
May Love be the blinder
Annihilating foul vanity
Torturing the earthborn
Flawed, blemished humanity
And, inward Fire consume
All allure to muck of earth
Sensual brass-necked robbery
Measuring swords for new birth
Be driving force rich in gallantry
Relishing theocentric Feast
Willing death than misdeed
Fending off oppressive beast
Billows of unteachable corpses
Intoxicated with poisonous weeds
Refusing to - sober Truth - commit
Fruitful in vice, fruitless trees
Unworthy of breast-beating
On devious, tortuous, roundabout sprees
Cut down, thrown into devouring fire
In dungeon cells, tormented, not able to flee
Pierce the darkness well-aimed Arrow
Wound the soul in blooming tall
Perforate living nightmare
Probing lifeless preys
Unfitted for credible merit
In toto undo, disinherit
From bounteous Land
Limitless gifts inherit
Burning tears dried
With tender Hand
By benevolence Royal
Through onerous toil
Hedonistic impulse
Roses all the way...
Trample, spoil
Silent, solemn gust...
Drops Sacred of Blood
Sinking mercilessly!
Bountifully, Mercifully
Into the pavement's dust...
WOW! I'm short of breath after reading this outstanding piece of art. You undoubtedly have a masterful technique to draw the reader right through the computer screen. The meager brain explodes with vivid visions at powerfully penned truths. Unsurpassed style and shock value-invaluable to one's soul.
Willing death than misdeed expresses powerfully the ugliness & the final risk of sin! Great skill in leading from one important insight to another helpful insight, and surprising thought as roses all the way trample. This is what quality writing is all about! The last stanza says it all, calling us to truly revere the greatest PRICE OF OUR SALVATION! God bless you Dr. for enlarging our minds!
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Dear B C - truly, I am unable to express my gratitude for this verily generous act of supportively commenting on few pieces of my work that you conveyed with extraordinary probity & nobility of spirit; I am forevermore thankful & willingly - joyfully obliged! Heaven be praised! Forces of evil remain on the offensive, abortion being one monstrous extremity of lawless insanity indicative of pervasiveness of amorality, self-serving rationales & internal self-annihilation through the gravity of sin. Yet, the supreme law of the life of each person is to fervently strive to become more like the Divine Victim through constant penitential movements of the soul & self-sacrificing actions - life-giving actions. May the Ultimate Giver bless you with fullness of divine gifts through indwelling of the Holy Spirit in your magnanimous soul... and the beating Heart of sanctifying Grace in our souls unfold into the reality of Heavenly Glory! Love - D K