bianca felix

Rules - Poem by bianca felix

Let me climb into your lap

And kiss your eyes closed

Because I love the way they shine

And I don't want them looking

When I follow your rules

And you break mine.

Comments about Rules by bianca felix

  • (4/26/2010 7:10:00 PM)

    i think maybe a bit too short, but I still did really like the poem (Report) Reply

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  • (4/26/2010 6:36:00 PM)

    Very good, kinda short but that's okay. The fourth line is a great one, but it seems kinda out of place. (Report) Reply

  • (4/26/2010 4:15:00 PM)

    nice expression and thoughts, you have a gift (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 26, 2010

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