Run Amok................ Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

Run Amok................

Rating: 2.7


Tonight i will take my own life.
raise the bar a little, and see
how red this blood is.tonight
i will wolow in this pain, bath
myself in it, and curse this
plight with my mouth and hands,
tonight i shall see if theres a
bright light or a tunnel with
ghost and demons, tonight
the fat lady sings.......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Nagy 09 May 2005

Sad poem. I think everyone feels like giving up at one time or another. What makes us stronger people is how we work through those feelings. I feel like....you can't win the fight if you arn't here. With suicide, there's no way around it...you lose. Moving poem David, I hope you are doing better today. Sincerely, mary

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Alice Vedral Rivera 09 May 2005

I can relate. Tempted but not an option. Life goes on. We have no choice. The eventually passes- as it must. avr

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***** ***** 08 May 2005

Hmmm, this is a little worrying really.. I hope it is fantasy or metaphor. Be well. Sx

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