Rust Poem by T Michael Farrell

Rust

Rating: 2.5


every relationship you've ever had
Ended up turning bad
Everyone, all of them, broke your heart
good ones or bad ones, you just can't tell them apart
right now your heart is covered in rust
so when a good one comes around you refuse to trust
and that is the saddest part of all
because quit you they will and once again you'll bawl
but you won't realize how good he was, his motives you had to mistrust
and now there's another layer on your heart, another layer of rust

Rust
Thursday, March 22, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: trust
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank Adie 22 March 2018

This is rhythmic and quite insightful. Words poetically weaved to paint a picture of how we respond to issues judging with our past experiences. A great piece.

1 0 Reply
T. Michael Farrell 26 March 2018

Thanks for your positive comments on my poem Rust.

0 0
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
T Michael Farrell

T Michael Farrell

Fort Worth, Texas, USA
Close
Error Success