Rust And Strings Poem by Sharron Stephenson

Rust And Strings

Rating: 5.0


the change of the feelings,
inside the heart,
can mean,
the wind of love,
has caught the strings so tight,

the puppet will fall,
with a bump,

the chains of sorrow,
will crash and rust

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eric Cockrell 24 September 2011

again, strong poetry... you say a lot with few words! love this one!

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Melancholy Man 20 September 2011

Great use of the puppet imagery. Most of us are ultimately guided by our hearts, even if we try to convince ourselves othewise! Good poem.

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Sam Varghis 18 September 2011

Nice poem. I invite you to my poems to read and comment. Brgds, Sam

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