your 1st poem.. Welcome Meredith!
Verses filled with a bleak anguish.. a deep pain..
'She had gone off her hinges /Her mind tore her apart // And the train did it's part.'
Your note/interpretive key explains very well the theme of the poem, but I find your lyric really well penned.
You're very good. Keep on writing poetry! And thanks for sharing.
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your 1st poem.. Welcome Meredith! Verses filled with a bleak anguish.. a deep pain.. 'She had gone off her hinges /Her mind tore her apart // And the train did it's part.' Your note/interpretive key explains very well the theme of the poem, but I find your lyric really well penned. You're very good. Keep on writing poetry! And thanks for sharing.