Sunday, January 18, 2015

Rusted Rails Comments

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Four feet, eight-and-a-half inches
The two beams split apart
She had gone off her hinges
Her mind tore her apart
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Meredith Ogburn
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Fabrizio Frosini 19 January 2015

your 1st poem.. Welcome Meredith! Verses filled with a bleak anguish.. a deep pain.. 'She had gone off her hinges /Her mind tore her apart // And the train did it's part.' Your note/interpretive key explains very well the theme of the poem, but I find your lyric really well penned. You're very good. Keep on writing poetry! And thanks for sharing.

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