I saw a deflated Santa
drooping from a roof.
Maybe a robin pecked him
but I think, to tell the truth,
that Santa wasn't too well made
he wasn't very strong
I hope the real one's better
he's working all night long
Delightful Poem, Mike! Rhythm and rhyme are perfect, too. Very well done - I loved it. Warmest regards, CJ
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I dont know if I would say HO HO HO...maybe HA HA HA. Comical, I love the flow of its rhymes and accurate syllable counts huh! I bet even school graders can relate on this poem....so its for all ages. Wonderful! HAPPY HOLIDAYS