Saturday, April 7, 2007

Sad Story 2 Comments

Rating: 5.0

He hid himself from the world
As he felt it was only filled with hate and lies
He forgot about and never realised
That he would want comfort
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David Harris
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Lisa Wilkinson 10 April 2007

'He thought that the loneliness Was better than voices He walked through his life Never wanting a friend' David this is my favourite piece here, why? Feel I can relate. Well done, your poetry is fab and Im sorry too! Lisa x0x0x0

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 08 April 2007

You will have the dog owners in tears my friend...10

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JoAnn McGrath 07 April 2007

Oh too sad. We have three dogs Old, middle age, very young That way it's much easier, not much, but easier when they pass. They're extra children in the family. But your ending is very sad. : O( To be that alone : O{

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Marvin Mcm. 07 April 2007

This poem is very deep! David, you're a great poet! !

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