Tinus Erasmus

Rookie (1992-09-25 / Kempton Park)

Sadness In The Rain - Poem by Tinus Erasmus

Seeing you in that way
Taking my breath away,
Your pain is deep,
Your emotions are weak,
Crying in the rain
Trying to kill the pain,
Free your heart
To feel my love,

We walked a long long road together,
We will love eachother
Forever and ever
Never again
Feel the pain
Nothing will feel the same
When our hearts change,
Stopping to restrain,
Our hearts from love,
Fearing the pain.

Comments about Sadness In The Rain by Tinus Erasmus

  • (5/8/2011 12:01:00 PM)

    Great poem. Very well described. Great imagery and style. Excellent stuff. I rate it 10.
    Thanks for sharing.....
    Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 8, 2011

Poem Edited: Sunday, May 8, 2011

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