Sailing To The Island. Poem by Michael Walker

Sailing To The Island.

Rating: 5.0


The ferry from Auckland to Waiheke
takes only about half an hour.
On the top, windy deck on a clear day
I could make out Great Barrier Island
outlined on the distant horizon.
Great Barrier, where I had that holiday
and met a friendly Taiwan family.
Strangers at first sight,
there were soon no barriers.


Today the ferry berthed at Oneroa wharf
close to town where I strolled at random
until I chanced on an edition of Ginsberg's poems.
The slim book had the poem's text on one page
and black and white drawings on the facing one.
Right away I was taken by Allen's long lines
going right across the page, overflowing;
and his long complex sentences minus punctuation.
I had not read such stanzas by any New Zealand poet.


As the bus to Palm Beach negotiated hills
I read 'Howl', a long poem in three sections.
It begins, ' I saw the best minds of my generation destroyed by
madness...' and ends with a talk to his friend
who is a patient in Rockland hospital,
'Carl Solomon! I'm with you in Rockland
where you're madder than I am'...
'I'm with you in Rockland
where we are great writers on the same dreadful
typewriter'. The bus arrived just then at Palm Beach
where I would swim for hours in its warm waters of escapism.

- 15 February,2019.

Sailing To The Island.
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The poem is a true story in my life. It happened a few years ago. Buying the poetry book happened purely by chance, though it would have a lasting effect. I like the sense of comradeship in the refrain 'I'm with you in Rockland'. It means to me, 'I will be there for you. I won't abandon you'.
I have imitated Allen's omission of punctuation, commas in particular. Let the reader supply his own punctuation. Things seem to happen faster without commas, semi-colons, colons. All the first section of 'Howl' is one very long periodic sentence, linked by the relative pronoun 'who'.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard D Remler 15 February 2019

A powerfully vivid and meaningful penning. Love the style and the imagery. . Worth reading again and again. A favorite. Loved it.

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Michael Walker 16 February 2019

I very much value your positive assessment of the poem. I have had to think hard to come up with better imagery. 'Howl' is also a poem which I read again and again, like last night. The photo is of Palm Beach.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 February 2019

Half an hour's journey from Auckland to Waiheke resides in the top memory. Remaining with rock-lands you have to swim for long hours. A true story told in this poem is very brilliantly and excellently presented....10

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Michael Walker 16 February 2019

Yet again you have highlighted the poem's best point: that it is a true story. Brilliant intuition.

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