Stefanie Fontker

Sandstorm

She ponders the fidelity
Of the stars and the moon.
And she comes to me
Like an angry sandstorm
Trapped in an hourglass.
Hurling all of her tears
At my dust scrapped heart,
And clouding my vision
With her endless fury.

Poem Submitted: Friday, September 30, 2011
Poem Edited: Saturday, October 1, 2011

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Comments about Sandstorm by Stefanie Fontker

  • Stan Petrovich (10/1/2011 11:06:00 AM)

    I agree with S. Mcdonald. Expand and conquer.

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  • Sean Mcdonald (9/30/2011 4:04:00 PM)

    I really like it, there's something powerful there. Another verse would be wonderful.

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