Saudade Poem by wabi sabi

Saudade

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just a shadow presence
there I feel you
where we used to meet
but not any more

just a fully bloomed flower
off falls a petal
there is a perfectly completed mission
but not any more

I find the imperfect beautiful

climax is too short to stay there

Saturday, December 1, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: flower
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 05 December 2012

A nice lovelost poem. Gud job! Do coment mine too.

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