Monday, December 14, 2009

Save Me Daddy Comments

Rating: 2.5

Daddy help me Im crying,
Slit my wrists daddy, save me Im dieing,
Head hung low,
No lower can I go,
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Kay Davies
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Antonio Liao 15 December 2009

you taught us to remember the moment of the past.....your great my friend....God bless....a 10 +++++

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masked lady 15 December 2009

Nice poem, but sad. It speaks of a confused child. Oh, children, when will they ever be safe from life's sad circumstances? You write well, keep it up. GOD BLESS.

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Kay Davies

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