Save Our Earth (By 9year Old) Poem by Aami Niyati

Save Our Earth (By 9year Old)



Once my earth was beautiful..
It had blue necklace made of rivers..
It had a green dress made of trees...

But now,
She has necklace made of carbon dioxide
and dress of cities..

Look,
our earth is dying
Please save her...
Dont cut trees...
Let' save her...

Thursday, June 4, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: environment
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My daughter Aami wrote it today for tommorrow...June5th 2015. She is Nine.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Niyati Sahana 05 June 2015

Dear kelly and fabrizio..thank you so much for such a generous and inspirational comment. Infact aami is unaware that i posted her poem.. When she was reciting it over phone i just noted down. The very first attempt with out any support. Going to be a surprise gift for her after she gets back from her vacation.

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Kelly Kurt 05 June 2015

A budding poet and conservationist. You should be proud

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Fabrizio Frosini 04 June 2015

9 y.o.! wow.. you've a bright future, Aami, both as a poet and as an environmentalist. Thanks for sharing and KEEP ON WRITING :)

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