Tuesday, April 24, 2012

Say What's Real Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why does it seem like you're holding back what you really want to say?
Remove your hands from your mouth and speak up
Don't hold back the truth, it needs to be heard
Stop shackling it up in your mind and telling them what they want to hear
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Khaleel Steir
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Romeo Della Valle 24 April 2012

Bravo! What a powerful and honest write which is well penned! You got what it takes to make it in the Poetry World: TALENT, Khaleel! I wish you would have put this thought provoking write in a poetic format (Paragraph) nevertheless, it is very strong and touching! Your potential is clearly shown in this write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo from New York City!

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Khaleel Steir

Khaleel Steir

Hartford, Connecticut
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