David Taylor

Rookie (3rd January 1956 / LONDON, UK)

Saying Goodbye? - Poem by David Taylor

Damp in both eyes
Hesitant in breath
Heavy in heart
Blank in thought
Leaden in both feet
Wavering in voice
Dry in mouth
Low in spirit
Depleted in happiness
And then I see
That I am in your heart
And from there
I will not ever depart.


Comments about Saying Goodbye? by David Taylor

  • (7/31/2007 3:42:00 AM)


    Nothing but a wonderful ending in this captivating poem....No goodbye's here. You and she are but 'one.' How fortunate and wonderful to be blessed with love so true.. a not so sure beginning, but ah, a magnificent ending....you express yourself very well in here....need to go back to 'mi bed.........nite, nite now....xo marci......... (Report) Reply

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  • Ernestine Northover (7/25/2007 1:44:00 PM)


    What a delight to read. I was beginning to feel quite down until the end dissolved all that!
    Lovely piece.
    Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
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  • (7/25/2007 6:58:00 AM)


    absolutely wonderful 10 from me. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 25, 2007

Poem Edited: Thursday, March 24, 2011


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