Saying Goodbye?

Rating: 5.0

Damp in both eyes
Hesitant in breath
Heavy in heart
Blank in thought
Leaden in both feet
Wavering in voice
Dry in mouth
Low in spirit
Depleted in happiness
And then I see
That I am in your heart
And from there
I will not ever depart.

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Marci Made 31 July 2007

Nothing but a wonderful ending in this captivating poem....No goodbye's here. You and she are but 'one.' How fortunate and wonderful to be blessed with love so true.. a not so sure beginning, but ah, a magnificent ending....you express yourself very well in here....need to go back to 'mi bed.........nite, nite now....xo marci.........

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Ernestine Northover 25 July 2007

What a delight to read. I was beginning to feel quite down until the end dissolved all that! Lovely piece. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Aasiq the poet 25 July 2007

absolutely wonderful 10 from me.

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