Screams The Crumbling Soul Comments

A good start with a nice poem, Farrukh Jawed. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

Don't you remember those promises Those hugs, Those forhead kisses Voiceless walks in beautiful moonlight How your one smile made my world bright- - - - memories of innocent joys which comforted the soul and now the heartbreaking situation.... well written.... with lots of emotions....... thank you dear poet. tony

They are lying, come and see They say you cheated me But I trust you'll come back To mend my soul, To fix my heartache.. Welcome to the world of poem. Well written. I offer u big 10. a message sent. Pl. respond.