Monday, February 13, 2006

Sea Breeze Comments

Rating: 4.7

White caped waves
In the curl of the sea
Smell of the ocean air
On the white sandy beach.
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Sherry Little
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Jim Foulk 17 January 2007

nicely done, it is almost like i was there, great work.

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Emma Johnson 15 May 2006

A bracing poem like the sea breeze it describes. Susie.

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Michael Gale 03 May 2006

Naute bad(as in nautical-get it?) This was a good poem with an effervescent overflow of refreshing originality. Somewhere in my many poems i'm sure i've written about the ocean and seagulls or sea otters.Too bad there are'nt beaches in Oklahoma(that i am aware of- that is) I have been to Californian beaches as well as Chicago's own Lake Michigan. I miss the sand between my toes while inmersed in waves of wetness. Good poem and God bless and best regards-Mike Gale.

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Ann Farmer 19 April 2006

I think this poem is wonderful! I love the beach!

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Sherry Little

Sherry Little

Riverside, California, USA
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