White caped waves
In the curl of the sea
Smell of the ocean air
On the white sandy beach.
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Naute bad(as in nautical-get it?) This was a good poem with an effervescent overflow of refreshing originality. Somewhere in my many poems i'm sure i've written about the ocean and seagulls or sea otters.Too bad there are'nt beaches in Oklahoma(that i am aware of- that is) I have been to Californian beaches as well as Chicago's own Lake Michigan. I miss the sand between my toes while inmersed in waves of wetness. Good poem and God bless and best regards-Mike Gale.
nicely done, it is almost like i was there, great work.