Sea Despair Poem by Zero empty

Sea Despair

Rating: 5.0


Sometimes on a high tide
certain rules might not abide
returned from land again to ocean
one does not see any plausible reason

In the very first observation
arguably one sees no pattern
with the moving of time
somewhere in mind there strikes a rhyme

a flash of light
a glow of hope
to lay things straight
with a constant hope

the pattern is figured
the purpose served
still looms the uncertainty
observed pattern fails at infinity

Despair seeps in, one looses the power of will
Sinking in the past, making time to go standstill
imagining life to be some unbroken seal
however strong, time shall always heal

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Luciana Isabelle 16 August 2013

wow...wonderfully written! thumbs up!

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Paul Brookes 13 August 2013

another beautifully written rich and vibrant poem even if there is an underlying sadness. Your phrasing is unusual an in 'Making time go stand still ' and well thought out which gives great texture to your writing, Beautiful 10/10 BB : O)

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Dave Walker 06 August 2013

A great poem with a great flow to it.

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