Saturday, January 20, 2007

Sea Of Dead Ships Comments

Rating: 4.2

A light from heaven flickers gently on the waves.
As a boat rocks merrily, above a sea of dead men’s graves.
Colours of the rainbows, spread fingers from the shore.
The sea is filled with beauty; it is also filled with lore.
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David Harris
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Andrew mark Wilkinson 11 March 2007

I did not know you where a salty old sea dog david... a tale of the sea indeed...8

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Melvina Germain 22 January 2007

Oh David, this is a fabulous poem flowing so beautifully and rhyming all the way. You kept me totally inspired to read on, no down moments only upward bound. I enjoyed this read immensely. A wonderful absolutely wonderful tale of the sea. Write on my friend, you must not stop. Awesome work David--Melvina---

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Alison Smith 20 January 2007

This is a great tale.. one that is of both sea and body... Alison

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