indira babbellapati

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Sea-Senryu - Poem by indira babbellapati

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Crumpled, the sea
Folded unto herself
Her cheek, salty!

Sprained, the sea
Faltered in her stride
Halting flow!

Rising in revolt
The sea retreated
Far from land!


Comments about Sea-Senryu by indira babbellapati

  • (6/8/2013 1:55:00 AM)


    The varying moods of the sea are well portrayed in your Senryus, Indira! (Report) Reply

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  • Shahzia Batool (6/4/2013 11:58:00 PM)


    Placid as a woman in house-chores, ferocious as a woman in rage, rebellious as a woman in revolt- -this your moody sea! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 4, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, August 2, 2013


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