indira babbellapati

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Sea-Senryu - Poem by indira babbellapati

Crumpled, the sea
Folded unto herself
Her cheek, salty!

Sprained, the sea
Faltered in her stride
Halting flow!

Rising in revolt
The sea retreated
Far from land!

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  • (6/8/2013 1:55:00 AM)

    The varying moods of the sea are well portrayed in your Senryus, Indira! (Report)Reply

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  • Shahzia Batool (6/4/2013 11:58:00 PM)

    Placid as a woman in house-chores, ferocious as a woman in rage, rebellious as a woman in revolt- -this your moody sea! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 4, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, August 2, 2013

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