Searching Poem by Jake Gassiot

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I can’t find her
Where is my love
In this bird like mass
I can’t believe it
I have found her
I’ve passed her 3 times already
I can hardly recognize her
She is so different
She is so beautiful
She approaches me
Her hair is waving
I find myself gasping for air
Those deep eyes
They are like black holes
They pull me closer and closer
I can’t seem to move
Anywhere but towards her
Those deep eyes have captured me
I am a slave in her command
Her hand reaches out
I return the gesture
I cradle her hand in mine
It is so soft
I can’t remember how to speak…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gabriella Franco 18 August 2006

*screams* I LOVE IT! beautifully written, you captivated my attention all the way down. Oh how i wish someone would feel that way for me... these poems show me that guys CAN feel.... it's amazing :) thanks, jake! :)

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