Seasons Poem by Laurie hill

Seasons

Rating: 5.0


As winter touched her ashen face,
it touched this heart that beat.
With memories of the spring of her,
the warmth my soul did meet.

The summer of her laughter,
the autumn of her sighs.
The breeze blown clouds her whispers,
the rambling brook her cries.

No spring will warm my life again,
nor summer bring the dove.
No autumn bring the still for me,
since winter claimed my love.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sunflower Field 08 February 2009

Wonderfully written and very touching. Good job. Bryanne

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Tia Maria 09 February 2009

Love & life, what we endure & all have to face but are never prepared for. Written so perfectly in poetry 10/10 I may need an albatross delivery now Laurie... Take care, T

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Touching and beautiful, blending the seasons throughout oh so skilfully. Also so wistful and sensitive. Laurie, this has touched my soul and heart with its beauty. Karin Anderson

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Patti Masterman 12 August 2009

Now this is my kind of writing! (smile) . Need to read this one again and again.

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Milica Franchi De Luri 04 August 2009

Now i can't stop reading your poems.They are all beautiful, engaging and heartfelt.

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Sally Carter 05 July 2009

Beautiful, moving, tender..... I am in awe of the way your words flow so apparently effortlessly.

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Ruth Walters 12 May 2009

This one is really good, reminded me a bit of the song...Autumn Leaves...remember that one? Ruthy: -)

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Sonya Florentino 01 April 2009

i'm at a loss for words... can 'beautiful' suffice?

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