Secretly Living Toy Poem by Cleo Blue

Secretly Living Toy

Rating: 4.5


What was once filled with joy
Is now only a broken toy
Cracked by fears
Broken by tears
And thrown in the corner
Broken, Unfixable.... Forgotten

Years later there's a yardsale
That toy wishes she could bail
Then someone picks her out
She cant trust whatever this is about
She's been broke too many times before
So she jumps out of his hands
And runs out the door

Say goodbye to that toy
Cuz she isnt here anymore

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Thanks for all the support and pms guys! And yes if you pm me you dont have to comment but i still love comments! ...I mean who doesnt... ok this poems was crappy cuz i was getting another poem idea which im about to go write so watch out for it! 8D
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Beckham 02 January 2013

the opening stanza is gripping. The pace to it is relentless and you churned out words that evoke the right emotions. This speed in the opening stanza without control will be silly. But you showed great composure and tenacity to convey your thoughts expertly. In the opening stanza.10/10

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Hans Vr 26 December 2012

niice write

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