See Saw Poem by Kevin Patrick

See Saw

Rating: 5.0

seesaw to the far right
or seesaw to the left
when you shimmy to your tribes lines
the weight of dogma pivots
and democracy comes crashing
as the centre cannot hold

, , , the imbalance
of ideology
becomes a reverence
for calamity

and the seesaw
shatters
as we all fall
down...

Friday, August 4, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: political,ideology,democracy,america,bigotry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 11 August 2023

TRUTh, written excellently! Congatulations. Should certainly be read by the guilty parties.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 11 August 2023

Your powerful poem masterfully attests to the evils of bigotry with its dire results

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s.zaynab kamoonpury 05 August 2023

Yes, bigotry and extrenism are wrongful and bad and never a part of real true religion as i know. Kudos for this fine poem!

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