Thursday, September 28, 2006

See The Oasis Comments

Rating: 5.0

Catch a falling star,
put a rainbow in your pocket.
See the oasis afar,
get there in your own rocket.
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David Darbyshire
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Marilyn Shepperson 28 September 2006

A great poem. Love the last line. Marilyn

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Tiyler Durden 28 September 2006

very good Dave, Very vivid and picturesque (Spelt wrong) Have a 10 from tiyler...

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