Seekingclosure Poem by Lodigiana Poetess

Seekingclosure

Rating: 5.0


Don't look for me behind closed doors or drapes and shuttered blind;

Don't look for me in crowded rooms because you'll never find

A hint, a shadow or a sign that I was ever there,

No essence of me can be found if nothing left to care…

Don't look for me within the dark and tragic lonely place

You hide your feelings all the time…I'm not there, not a trace;

I won't appear within the ether nor the mists of time

I'm gone forever and entire there's nothing left that's mine;

Don't look for me- don't call my name -don't think of me with pain

Just leave the past all undisturbed and learn to live again……..

Seekingclosure
Wednesday, October 18, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: death,departure,learning,live,nothing,past,seeking,acceptance,afterlife
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 21 July 2020

Brilliant, simply brilliant. I love the beat, flow, meter and rhyme to your poem Lodigiana. Great imagery and sublimely displayed and the final line is to die for (no pun intended) simply saying to move on. Have you ever seen Truly, Madly. Deeply? 10+ and added to my favs. I wish you well in life and in poetry Lodigiana. Take care. Shaun.x.

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