Selfness Poem by Besma Dziri

Selfness

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Selfness
Emotional
Home for pleasure and pain
Dominant and shaping the brain
A journey of fathomless feels unleashed
An abiding pounding of life
Roaring whenever stirred
Irrational
Selfness

Selfness
Spiritual
A high yielding to God
A mysterious ascendant Self
A home for a radiating compassion
Inner power of healing Faith
Wrapping peace of silence
Mystic allure
Selfness

Selfness
Wednesday, May 22, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: spirituality
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A Double Rictameter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 24 May 2019

Home for pleasure and pain Dominant and shaping the brain A journey of fathomless feels unleashed An abiding pounding of life Roaring whenever stirred...you are becoming spiritual by understanding your own self and the reactions. lovely poem. write more. you have so much of philosophy in you. thanku. tony

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Besma Dziri 27 May 2019

I'm glad my humble work reached and touched your soul.. thank you so much for appreciating and encouraging.. deeply humbled.. Regards.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 May 2019

Though rictameter was created by two brothers just a couple of decades ago, but it’s form is very rarely found! I am very delighted to see it here! A scholarly work…well done!

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Besma Dziri 22 May 2019

My pleasure, Dr Dillip.. thank you so much for reading my work and kindly appreciating.. Deepest regards.

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