Semisolids Poem by Noah Smits

Semisolids

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Plasma-green river roll,
turgid as the hush fell;
hear—does it gush well?
Laggard old river-soul
wearied from the high tops:
hydrilla-lush swell,
stratified slurry-bowl,
heavy as a dumbbell,
blind as the Cyclops:
passing by, past control.
Fellow semisolid—
change finds you freely.
Look—see the animal!
It has gotten squalid.
See it ideally:
free-flowing, placable
by the great propulsion:
scarce would it weary!
Angst turned collapsible;
spite allowed expulsion.

Saturday, September 22, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: change,rivers
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
the river grows weary of flowing, the human grows weary of stagnating. there's potential for a beautiful & useful middle-ground in there somewhere...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 09 November 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Noah. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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