I lie down eyes shut,
my body and thoughts quiet.
My eyes still flicker!
Kyle, if I may.. I invite you to see THE HAIKU SOCIETY OF AMERICA web site (try Google) , to learn about haiku (and senryu) Cheers
interesting write, Kyle, but it's not on 'Nature'.. rather on 'Human nature'.. Thus I would label it as a senryu, not haiku Thanks for sharing Cheers
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Thanks for reading and sharing. I had not heard of senryu but yeah it does seem to be that and not haiku. Do you know of any good senryu poets?
Senryū Karai was the one who gave name to this poetic form.. Try The Haiku Society of America for senryu, too. The Canadian George Swede is a good haiku & senryu poet Ciao