Kyle Stanley


Senryu: Eyes Still Flicker - Poem by Kyle Stanley

I lie down eyes shut,
my body and thoughts quiet.
My eyes still flicker!

Topic(s) of this poem: abstract

Form: Haiku


Comments about Senryu: Eyes Still Flicker by Kyle Stanley

  • (10/29/2015 4:11:00 PM)


    Thanks for reading and sharing. I had not heard of senryu but yeah it does seem to be that and not haiku. Do you know of any good senryu poets? (Report) Reply

    Fabrizio Frosini (10/30/2015 4:22:00 AM)

    Senryū Karai was the one who gave name to this poetic form.. Try The Haiku Society of America for senryu, too. The Canadian George Swede is a good haiku & senryu poet
    Ciao

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  • Kelly Kurt (10/29/2015 2:46:00 PM)


    I love the 17 syllable form. Thanks for sharing, Kyle (Report) Reply

  • Fabrizio Frosini (10/29/2015 6:24:00 AM)


    Kyle,
    if I may.. I invite you to see THE HAIKU SOCIETY OF AMERICA web site (try Google) , to learn about haiku (and senryu)
    Cheers
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  • Fabrizio Frosini (10/29/2015 6:21:00 AM)


    interesting write, Kyle, but it's not on 'Nature'.. rather on 'Human nature'.. Thus I would label it as a senryu, not haiku

    Thanks for sharing
    Cheers
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 29, 2015

Poem Edited: Friday, October 30, 2015


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