Saturday, October 27, 2018

Senryu: Mother's Smile Comments

Rating: 5.0

With a baby on
the arm, if Mother smiles
That's Earthen Paradise.
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Pallab Chaudhury
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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 November 2018

The smile of a mother with her baby on arm has been astutely and touchingly delineated. A beautiful haiku.10

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Pallab Chaudhury 14 August 2019

Thank you so much for your kind words and comments... With regards pc

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M Asim Nehal 27 October 2018

Wow baby and mother how can the smile remains miles away. Fantastic Senryu...loved it.10++++

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Pallab Chaudhury 28 October 2018

Thank you so much for your very positive and encouraging comments. With best wishes. PC

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Dave Walker 27 October 2018

A mothers smile is everything, Great Haiku poem.

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Pallab Chaudhury 28 October 2018

Thank you very much for your kind visit and for the comment. With best wishes. PC

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