It doesnt make sense to me what you say
I dont understand
I am not gonne follow
and I would never agree
with a world thats hating me
I am not in common with a world thats running faster than me
with a world that makes me dizzy by turning from one thing to another
I am not like that and I never will be
How could we become
How could we forget
How can we exist like this
Origin is loosing
Tech is boomin
Mankind will never stop
Till we`ve forgotten where it began
It will not belonger in our intrest to ask to be and to disagree
We will create and consum
We will have fun and feel good
We all will be perfect
And no longer have time to cry to feel bad and to die
No time for walking no time for looking not a single second to regret
All is perfect and we will forget.
5.11.08 Crazy K
im also scared to what we're doing to the earth with all of our consumtion of it.. great poem, crazy K.
you have messages blocked good work I like the poem the last line is how would you say perfect.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
So very true. We need to slow down and smell the roses. This poem hits the nail on its head by confronting the reality of the mad pace of humanity.Good write.Keep them comming. We hav one thing in common, both of us have only posted one poem so far. I feel good to be the first to rate yours. Would you please read mine and let me know what you think?