Sense Intunation Poem by Faith ReAnne

Sense Intunation

Rating: 5.0


Watch me as I crumble
I'll break apart and die

Hear me as I'm screaming
I know you'll wonder why

Feel me as my body drops
You'll gently start to cry

Smell me as you often did
Your world fastly spinning by

Taste me as I vanish
into the air that now lies dry

Sense that I am dieing
and you won't have to say goodbye

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Dorn 06 September 2006

Faith, terrific employment of all five senses in composing a truely melancholic write. Good stuff! Brian

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Steve Hagget 06 September 2006

Wow - great poem - full of emotion and well penned, Steve

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