Thursday, April 23, 2009

Sense Of Myself. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Mindfully conscious of who imposes
Such tight control, and why, I reveal
The potential real me, sensibly go
Underground for a while and conceal
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COMMENTS
Sue Sie 23 April 2009

You win I feel...excellent write of deep feelings here... And 'good' will shine through.....10++

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Tsira Goge 23 April 2009

Fay, Good thoughts, it's remarkably..10... All best, Tsira

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Catrina Heart 23 April 2009

awesome poem, well expressed feelings and imagery............10+++

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Fiona Davidson 23 April 2009

And we all need our own freedom don't we Fay...excellent write...Fi 10+++

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Gordon Wilkinson 23 April 2009

mmmmmmm very deep - and self assessment sometimes brings the murky into the light. 10

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 23 April 2009

We do limit ourself some times, so worried what others may think, but you get one time at this ride enjoy it is my advice... Andy 10

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Fay Slimm

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