Mindfully conscious of who imposes
Such tight control, and why, I reveal
The potential real me, sensibly go
Underground for a while and conceal
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awesome poem, well expressed feelings and imagery............10+++
And we all need our own freedom don't we Fay...excellent write...Fi 10+++
mmmmmmm very deep - and self assessment sometimes brings the murky into the light. 10
We do limit ourself some times, so worried what others may think, but you get one time at this ride enjoy it is my advice... Andy 10
You win I feel...excellent write of deep feelings here... And 'good' will shine through.....10++