Sense Of Satisfaction Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Sense Of Satisfaction

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It is sense of satisfaction
That shows clear reflection
On face and in mind
The world seems beautiful and kind

What does one do in day time?
Work hard and sweat sometimes
The bread is chewed sweeter
The real smile comes that after

It is not of much significance
But life’s real chance
What do we feel after reaching home
It is real and tumultuous welcome

The sun and moon both are in sky
The stars too hang on and feel shy
When I think about treacherous day
I find goal and happiest way

It is good to be among companions
To think leisurely how to work on
It may be an end of the day
But next days schedule may certainly stay

Tuesday, April 29, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 April 2014

It is sense of satisfaction That shows clear reflection

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 April 2014

ok Al Mann11 hours ago nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 April 2014

Promising Ananda Arjuna11 hours ago I like the poem, I think that there are some touches. The rhyme is a little obvious for me, I don't think it adds much to the piece. I think that it really shows some promise though and it just makes me feel good to read it. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 April 2014

welcome mericel remirez 2 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 April 2014

welcome shujat ahmed 2 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 April 2014

Sherry Marino likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome 2 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 April 2014

Like 29 Apr by Priyanshi Dass to Sense of satisfaction

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 April 2014

Like 29 Apr by Priyanshi Dass | Reply

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