Thursday, September 14, 2006

Serenade Comments

Rating: 5.0

Luscious Lass in lurk under the dusky evening sky.
Her lustre in the night fall,
Has the hapless Sun ever seen?
He never got the opportunity in his lifetime.
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nimal dunuhinga
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Sandra Fowler 14 September 2006

Very eloquent. Memorable music of the night. Only the last line lets us know that the poet feels the tune leaves something to be desired. Take care, Nimal. Sandra

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Tranquil Ocean 14 September 2006

Nice to see Nimal in a differnt legacy: -) Well written. TO

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