Vishal Sharma

Gold Star - 5,400 Points (India)

Shadow - Poem by Vishal Sharma

My past sometimes ask me
what would my mistakes been
though I brought stars for her
I defeated by her soft innocence
She was the poision I was taking
my lungs never complained this
it was all her shadow
that broke my heart into pieces

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Acrostic


Comments about Shadow by Vishal Sharma

  • Shakil Ahmed (11/15/2015 10:23:00 AM)


    brilliant poem with nice thoughts, you have presented your feelings with beautiful images, thanks for sharing, i invite you to read some of my poems and leave your comment. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 15, 2015



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