Password Of My Life

Rating: 3.8

I have a well managed three dimensional structure
that makes me one among the crowd of all of you
I sing before humanity and beg him to return my soul
and, in return I get a whole wide mouth of respect

A good thought often flickers into my mind alltime
I have no courage to tide them into a single mass thought
rather, my life is shattered and each piece cries your name
are you listening to my grief and don't give ugly look to me

you see, my mother tells me that I write the best, as my mom
and I think about my poems that are eventually my life
am i writing well, then why dont anybody read me
Have I committed any blunder or something else has been done

My life is rather boring, it sucks, my wife
made up my mind, going to change password of my life..

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 19 July 2013

we all need a password to our life. then it would not be so easily disturbed. a good write

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Ramesh Rai 22 July 2013

i think you are still unmarried. no matter a poet can imagine.

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Onyeme John 20 July 2013

Witty, interesting and full of driving words. Nice...

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Heather Wilkins 19 July 2013

we all need a password to our life. then it would not be so easily disturbed. a good write

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Sanjukta Nag 30 October 2015

Everyone needs someone special in his/her life who will become the password of his/her life. Good concept. The misery of life is well expressed.

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Vishal Sharma 16 October 2015

wrote it when i was feeling low in life verse to make me get up

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Geetha Jayakumar 11 August 2013

Lovely poem Vishal.. Interesting to read your poem..

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Hazel Durham 29 July 2013

Change your mindset will set you free, an interesting write that reflects on your life with great lines!

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Payal Parande 23 July 2013

interesting indeed each word new and tell the story you want to, good one dear keep on going love di

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