poet Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***shadow Of Dream***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

SHADOW OF DREAM

dappled wings of love awe in void
as sultry wind blows on elysian bay
butterfly gently ruffles over tuft green
looking to grin of green on its den.

night yet awaits deep in lone silence
birds chirrup falling alike in its nest
moon yet knows quest of wild waves
as when anchored to its depth of ocean

eyes rill on silky shadow of dream
murky silence may ruin the sleep
breath from sultry breeze enlightens heart
yet look ahead to the tree jingling in rain

storm crunches flower’s beauty of grace
speckle of whisper ingrains in its veil
thirst mills through sands of resurgence
blue slowly deciphers code of midnight love,

breeze still riffles across mute glow
beauty slowly expiates from head of lily
luscious resilience seem to inflame within
betiding, to reach the moon ness on hill top

Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 24, 2009
Poem Edited: Monday, May 25, 2009

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  • Udaya Shankar Pant (12/11/2009 12:05:00 AM)

    very good and environmental! ..10 from me

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  • Jimmy Reed (10/18/2009 8:18:00 AM)

    so beautiful...lovely write.......10

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  • Aziz AlkaabiAziz Alkaabi (9/9/2009 5:13:00 AM)

    If this is a shadow of a dream, the dream I think would be in Nervana.
    This so enchanting and delicately surreal.
    I read it slowly and contemplated between the lines.
    This is what the work of this astonishing author requires; patient slow read blended with respect and that desire to learn and cherish what you learn and I guarantee a soaring to serine places and elysian bays.
    I am so happy i started my day reading this superb poem.
    Thank you Dr. Subhendu for sharing your gift with us.

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  • there is a poet in me! (9/1/2009 1:19:00 PM)

    so beautiful...lovely write....thanks for sharing....a10+++++

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  • Carol-Anne SpaldingCarol-Anne Spalding (7/7/2009 10:51:00 AM)

    I adore this poem..so well written and communicated...you are a talent to be treasured

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  • Jaci Burns (7/6/2009 8:20:00 PM)

    ITS GREAT I LOVE IT I GAVE IT A 10

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  • Tamara Hanaring A Thought Mate (7/4/2009 3:57:00 AM)

    congratulation...............

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  • Bob Gibson (7/3/2009 11:35:00 AM)

    A very intriguing poem, holds one captive!

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  • Ronald Doku (7/1/2009 4:58:00 PM)

    great poem. has deep meaning.

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  • Dr.subhendu KarDr.subhendu Kar (7/1/2009 11:47:00 AM)

    From : Mubeen Sadhika (India ;)
    To : Dr.subhendu Kar
    Date Time : 7/1/2009 5: 39: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject : shadow of dream

    It is a nice, beautiful piece.

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  • Pancho Villa (7/1/2009 11:43:00 AM)

    Excellent use of imagery!
    This poem is worthy of a 10.

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  • Ch J Satyananda Kumar (7/1/2009 1:06:00 AM)

    You are a great lover of nature it seem. The poem is great, Dr. Kar.

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  • Christina Phan (7/1/2009 12:57:00 AM)

    This piece was wonderful
    Nice imagery
    I can picture this all clearly
    kept it up Dr
    10++

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  • Poetic Soul (6/30/2009 11:58:00 PM)

    Well written, I like the imagery of it as well.

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  • Danny H (6/30/2009 4:15:00 PM)

    i lvoe the imagery, imagination, an devotion
    it was very beautiful.
    an insightful
    well done:
    keep on writing!

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  • Alycha Madrie (6/30/2009 3:53:00 PM)

    beautiful 10+

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  • Adi CoxAdi Cox (6/30/2009 2:59:00 PM)

    Very imaginative. The very idea of a dreams shadow is worth 10/10 in its own right.

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  • Jaleel Perinjanam (6/30/2009 1:36:00 AM)

    Solid dream has its shadow and the warm insight is capable to see the night that awaits deep in lone silence. ….. And the silence ruins the sleep while hot breeze inhales. But same time the eyes are on jingling trees. Dear doctor, your emotional heart is filled with 7000 colors of rainbow. It is a colorful shadow (of dream) ….

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  • Nikunj Sharma (6/29/2009 10:23:00 PM)

    i never knew that dreams have shadows, until I read your poem...wonderful imagination....pls spare ur precious moments to read two of my poems called MY DREAM and SPOONERISM OF MY LIFE....Shall be grateful for your comments

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  • Howard Kern (6/29/2009 4:13:00 PM)

    Nice mixture of nature to feelings. I don't know where Elysain Bay is, but you sure make it sound very nice! thanks for sharing.10

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