Sunday, March 4, 2018

Shadows Highlight Vacant Space Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shadows highlight vacant space
Where the sun hasn't spoken for days.
And I learned something new today
I think the sky's opening up for me.
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Sue Sure
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Chinedu Dike 22 March 2018

Work of an active imagination, well articulated and nicely encapsulated with insight. Thanks for sharing Sue.

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 March 2018

You are in love with light....... swallowing more sunlight from the moss covered roof...... fine imagination and conveying the desire to be in light...... thank you dear poet. tony

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 March 2018

It's a beautiful poem! Befitting title.. liked it....10

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