Friday, March 28, 2008

Shake Spear Comments

Rating: 4.5

I want to be a farmer writing poems
In a barn amongst the chickens
As well as short stories and long novels
Like the main man Charles Dickens
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David Darbyshire
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Kim Barney 19 July 2015

David, you have two unfavorable comments below. Did you know that you can delete them? You can and should. I was drawn to this poem because of the title. I once had a poem called 'Shake that Spear! '. It was a parody of Shakespeare's sonnet 'Shall I Compare Thee to a Summer Day? ' which was chosen as poem of the day once. It hardly got any hits at all, but then I changed the title to 'Shall I Compare Thee to a Bale of Hay? ' and it became very popular for a while.

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Georgios Venetopoulos 07 February 2013

Good work! Way to go Ajax!

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Hardik Vaidya 07 February 2013

So will I. Captures the primeval desire second to finding ones own self I the reflection of another. I loved this creation.

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Chuck Audette 16 September 2009

Nice write, you capture the joy of literature (something the two morons below must lack in their cave) . Pun-ctual ending, as well. We get the point. -chuck

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Jesse Thompson 29 May 2008

This poem sucks and so do you

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Htfhfg Ghfhfghg 29 May 2008

U r so garbage omy goddness wat kind of poem i shtis u shuld just stop wasting ur tyme wirtng garbage poems and go do something useful with ur gay life like buying a book and reading it u have no future in life hahhahahah

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