Shaking Poem by Adam Wayne Mackay

Shaking

Rating: 4.3


I'm trying to display
Residual effects
Of the things that I see
From the tip of my pen
Shaking...
I hate the words
I'm scratching my skin
I must understand
Find my way back
To what made me
Begin

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Mc Creath 02 October 2015

Delightful beginning here on PH. Your wit shows in your words.

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Adam Wayne Mackay 02 October 2015

Thank you very much Mary!

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Jane Elliston 02 October 2015

I like this poem and can identify with it. For me it flows nicely but for the word skin. Please submit more of your work

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Adam Wayne Mackay 02 October 2015

Thank You Jane! I will be submitting more, lol im new to computers so the process of transferring my work from paper to here is going to take a little bit. Thanks again for your comment!

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Jane Elliston 02 October 2015

Ivan identify with this I like it. to me it flows nicely but for the word skin

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Jane Elliston 02 October 2015

I like this very much. I can identify with it.

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