Shaky Foundation Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Shaky Foundation

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Life and wife should always be held firmly
As they wait for quick grab easily
Assure full safety and quick return
You shall be comfortable always in turn

Yes, shaky foundation may cause fall
So the construction has to be first class call
Walls must be erected on form ground
So you live happily with coming round

Give no excuse when you are writing
It must be full fledge war and fighting
The bloodshed may be there and so many deaths
But peace after it will be an easy breath

It must never be the half heart try
Whatever you do should have no more cry
“Come what may” slogan should fill the air
Danger should be warded off to come near

Just keep one thing in mind
At the end you will always find
There is always light
Only you must strive for right

No work is ordinary or small
It may face rough weather and call
Go in for it and never try to stall
It is necessary to avoid fall

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 16 November 2013

life and wife should always be held firmly, very true sir, thanks.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 November 2013

Ahmad Al_khatat9 minutes ago Great epic

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 November 2013

Life and wife should always be held firmly As they wait for quick grab easily

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 November 2013

wise words Guilty Pleasure8 minutes ago and thank you for sharing Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 November 2013

Kristin Reynolds7 minutes ago I like that you tie in your moral commentary to the piece and the betrayal of a shaky foundation. wonderful theme!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 November 2013

Wow Archie Voaklander8 minutes ago This is great good job. Loved the fourth paragraph. Comment +1 Well written and positive. I like it.,

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 November 2013

stan brierly7 minutes ago Yes don't waste time nor days. Comment +1 Nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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